Commitment #4
Whispers of Yearning: Draco Rosa's Commitment #4 Unveiled
Lyrics
You're not the color of fresh snow buried under the trees,
You don't possess the purity of fresh snow under trees, contrasting with your skin resembling a leafless forest.
but your skin, your skin reminds me of a forest without leaves.
The focus shifts to the skin, drawing a parallel between its appearance and a barren forest.
I fantasized my true divide
Expressing a longing for a genuine connection or understanding, a true divide.
We don't need to run tonight -- the pain I seize.
The narrator suggests there's no need to escape from problems tonight; they choose to confront the pain.
True, true, true, true disbelieving from far away. You'll inhabit the heart.
An assertion of disbelief from a distance, anticipating that the subject will inhabit the heart.
I wait... I wait another 18 hours and knock again.
A patient wait for 18 hours before attempting to connect again.
I wait 18 hours and knock again.
Repetition of the wait, emphasizing persistence in seeking connection.
The echo voices come from within
An internal dialogue with echo voices, possibly reflecting inner turmoil or conflicting thoughts.
After hearing this I ran away, thinking to myself:
The narrator runs away after an unsettling experience, contemplating a return another day.
I'll come another day.
Committing to revisit at a later time, maintaining hope for connection.
I wait another 18 hours and try.
Continuation of the 18-hour wait, indicating perseverance in the face of challenges.
This time around the ocean has seen the truth
The ocean symbolizes a witness to truth, and the narrator acknowledges a breakdown.
The truth is I'm breaking down, thinking to myself:
Contemplation on the authenticity of the experienced emotions, questioning if it's genuine.
Could this be truth?
Expressing uncertainty and doubt about the reality of the emotions.
We don't need to run tonight. The pain I seize.
Reiteration of the willingness to face pain rather than avoiding it.
Fear in my life... stay away.
An appeal to keep fear at bay in the narrator's life.
This time the sound of the ocean sings.
The sound of the ocean becomes prominent, symbolizing awareness or revelation.
I tremble in confusion, I wake up
A state of confusion and awakening, marked by trembling.
I think to myself: Could this be true?
Questioning the truth of the experience and the emotions felt.
Seconds went by and I noticed you.
After a period of time, the narrator notices the subject of their emotions.
Don't give up, get closer.
An encouragement to persist and get closer to the subject of affection.
As fast as I can when I came to the following night I was inside.
A swift transition from waiting to being inside, possibly indicating progress in the relationship.
Fear in my life again (why?)
Reiteration of fear in the narrator's life, questioning its presence.
I ran as fast as I can. When I came to
Running away fast from a situation, suggesting avoidance.
the following night I was inside, feeling my life.
Repetition of the transition to being inside, feeling the impact on life.
I wait 18 hours and knock again.
Another 18-hour wait before attempting connection again.
The echo voices comes from within;
The return of echo voices from within, indicating internal struggles.
after hearing this I ran away.
Escaping again after hearing the inner voices, acknowledging fear in life.
Fear in my life, I'll come another day.
Fear persists, committing to come back another day.
I wait 18 hours and knock again.
Continuation of the 18-hour wait and knocking, suggesting a cyclical pattern.
The echo voices come from within;
The return of echo voices, hinting at recurring internal conflicts.
A fter hearing this I ran away, thinking to myself: I'll come another day.
Running away again after hearing inner voices, planning to return another day.
I wait 18 hours and knock again.
Repetition of the 18-hour wait, reflecting persistence despite challenges.
The echo voices come from within;
Continued presence of inner voices, contributing to a cycle of retreat and return.
After hearing this I ran away, thinking to myself: I'll come another day...
A final commitment to return another day, maintaining hope for connection despite challenges.
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