Maria

Describing a location metaphorically as the edge of the world, suggesting remoteness or isolation.

Addressing an unnamed person who was not recognized or acknowledged.

Acknowledging the person as a girl, possibly emphasizing femininity or vulnerability.

Emphasizing the person's uniqueness as the only one in that particular context.

Repeating the setting at the edge of the world, possibly underscoring the significance of the location.

Introducing a new setting in the desert heat, adding a layer of intensity or challenge to the environment.

Describing a single star that is shivering, suggesting fragility or vulnerability.

Using "Sweet indiscreet" to possibly convey a mix of sweetness and vulnerability in the person.

Expressing familiarity with the person during their youth.

Reiterating the connection during youth, emphasizing a shared past.

Continuing to recall the relationship in the past.

Acknowledging the absence or departure of the person in the present.

Describing a small pool with Narcissus, a mythological figure symbolizing self-love or reflection.

Being drawn to the pool's spell, suggesting a fascination or attraction.

Seeing themselves in the reflection, possibly exploring self-awareness or introspection.

Describing the reflection as raw and excitable, hinting at the intensity of emotions.

Repeating the recognition of the person during their youth, reinforcing the theme of shared history.

Recalling the connection during youth, underscoring its significance.

Repeating the acknowledgment of the person's absence in the present.

Blank line, allowing for emotional resonance or reflection.

Highlighting the unawareness of the fragility or instability of their abilities.

Stressing the vulnerability or uncertainty of their young powers.

Expressing the emptiness that comes with this lack of understanding.

Blank line, providing a pause or space for reflection.

Characterizing the person with untamed hair and melancholic eyes.

Emphasizing the sadness reflected in the person's eyes.

Detailing the attire - white shirt and black tie - as part of the person's identity.

Stating ownership or connection, claiming the person as "mine."

Describing an action of grabbing the ring of the carousel, possibly symbolizing a decisive or pivotal moment.

Using the metaphor of tangoing from Heaven to Hell, suggesting a journey with highs and lows.

Continuing the metaphorical journey, indicating movement and change.

Concluding with the recognition of the person's significance, despite the challenges.

Repeating the familiarity with the person, emphasizing the enduring connection.